Kittens!!!
Last summer my dog had to get his shots, so we dropped him off at the vet and got something to eat. When we came back we saw a man quickly drop a box at the door and run to his car. Before we could ask what was in the box he was gone. My dad and I carefully took the box inside to see the vet, but she was busy. So I stepped up and I put my hand in the box and felt something furry. It was tiny kittens! And that's the story of when I put my hand in a box filled with flea infested kittens.
I think that you could probably end the sentence after furry and start a new one. I like the plot twist at the end!
ReplyDeletei found it was kinda confusing
ReplyDeleteI really liked you story! The ending I found a bit rushed but it is a really great story!
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